Dear Mama
By HW
Dear Mama, I want you to know that I love you so much.
Through all the hard times, you held your head up.
Dear Mama, you work so hard five days a week.
Just so I could have clothes, a roof over my head
And something to eat.
Dear Mama, I remember when we had no heat.
You wrapped a blanket around me, held me tight
And said you loved me.
Dear Mama, you stood behind me
Whether I was right or wrong.
Told me to stay positive and remain strong.
Dear Mama, days we had no lights
You told me things will be alright.
Being honest, it was hard for me to sleep at night.
Dear Mama, when you would visit me, it took me by surprise
At the end when we said our I love you’s
I went to my cell and cried.
Dear Mama, expressing my feelings wasn’t as easy as it seems.
I want you to know that you’re my beautiful Queen.
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I thought this was a very moving poem with a powerful story about maternal love. It is clear that the poem is a display of the unconditional support that the narrator’s mother had given to them. I enjoyed the use of repetition with starting every stanza off with “Dear Mama,” and the rhyme scheme gave a good rhythm to the poem. This kept the poem focused on one topic and really drove the meaning home. This is a really excellent piece of writing!
This poem was so deep in meaning and so well written. It does a really good job of exploring a topic that isn’t normally talked about and thanking mothers for the sacrifices they make. Specifically, I think the repetition of the phrase “Dear Mama” reiterates just how important this is to the writer. The journey from the start to the end of the poem is extremely fluid and it eloquently displays love and understanding in such a significant relationship. I loved it!
A wonderful tribute to your mother. For me, things with few words are EVEN MORE powerful. Are there some words in this poem that you can eliminate — to make it less wordy and have greater effect?
HW-what a beautiful poem! Your feelings of love and appreciation for your mom come through so strongly. You have a gift to convey deep feelings with words, keep sharing that gift.
You did a great job on this assignment. I know your mom is very proud of you. Continue to use your life experiences to help with your writing. Keep up the good work.
HW, this was a beautiful poem about a mother’s love, and your relationship with yours. I love how you used this to express how she loved you unconditionally and fought for you endlessly. I know your mom is proud of this poem, and you should be too! Great job.
I found your poem to be so heart warming and appreciative of the most important person in your life. I’m glad I came across this poem because I haven’t seen another like it. So unique and mind comforting. I hope the right people come across this piece, especially more mothers.
I love this poem and it holds such sweet and cute emotions for your mom. I know that even the tough times are core memories that you now look back to for comfort and I love the bond that you have between you and your mom.
This poem is so well written and deep. The repetition really emphasizes the amount a mother does for a child. It is also a beautiful convention of your personal story and a tribute to your mother.
Aw, this was so cute how it showed maternal love. I love it!
Your poem is filled with so much love and appreciation for your mama. The way you reflect on her sacrifices and unwavering support is incredibly touching. It’s clear how much she means to you, and your words beautifully honor her strength and love. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt tribute—it’s a reminder of the powerful bond between a mother and child.
This is such a heartfelt tribute to your mom. Your love and gratitude shine through every line—it’s truly beautiful. So inspiring to read! Thanks for sharing!
What a sweet and thoughtful poem! The repeated “Dear Mama” at the beginning of every stanza really emphasizes your love and admiration for your mom. Just off of your few words and phrases, I can tell your mom is a very loving and inspiring lady and I am sure it poured into you. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world.
This poem is a loving tribute to a mother’s strength and sacrifice. It shows how much she did to support and care for her child through tough times. The love and gratitude in the poem are clear, making it a beautiful reminder of a mother’s unconditional love.
This is one of the sweetest and most loving poems I have ever read. Every line starting with “Dear Mama” is so beautiful and it reminds me of a song. Through this poem, I can really tell the love and devotion your mom has for you through all the trials you experienced together. There really is nothing like a mother’s love and I know she is so proud of you! This is so beautiful and it definitely made me tear up. Thank you for sharing!
HW, your mother sounds like a phenomenal woman. Even through the struggles she was supportive and loving to you. This is a mother to be cherished, and I see through your words that you do. I am glad to know that she visited you. I love your use of reiteration with “Dear Mama” and your usage of rhyme. It is a letter from the heart that any mother would be proud to read.
This poem is so deep and profound. Mothers are such caring individuals. Thank you for showing your appreciation towards your mom. Your love and admiration for her shines through your poem. Mothers are amazing in all they do, and this reminds me to appreciate my mother even more. Your words are clear and flow perfectly. Thank you for sharing!