Black History
By RP
That’s all they want us to be is History
Black power.
Now that’s real power,
The type of power if we unite the
world, we’d devour.
leave the majority sour.
But it’s all a test,
They take our ideas and make it their
own success,
Then we’re stuck oppressed,
depressed,
stressed,
A complete mess,
It’s time to Progress
Because I must confess
We’ve been treated less than the best
And we’re the best by far
It’s time to shine like the northern star.
It’s no mystery
About our Black History
It’s time to be courageous and not coward
To embrace our Black Power.
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RP- I really enjoyed your poem! Your words are full of power and passion, keep sharing that with the world.
This poem lays out an incredibly powerful message. The systems of our world don’t want black individuals to succeed or exceed. The systemic racism within our country is palpable and persists. More specifically, this poems use of rhyme is very strong, effectively juxtaposing black pride and the importance of the black voice, with ways society limits and quiets said voice. In using this juxtaposition, it effectively allowed me, the reader, to think about these topics more deeply. Great job!
This poem is just so powerful to me. It gives me chills when I read it. The lyrical and flowing words of the poem just mean so much and have much power, and have such a large influence. It makes me reflect on where we are as a country, as a society, and where we need to go. What stands between us and where we must go. What we need to change.
The poem is a compelling and motivational piece that effectively captures the spirit of resilience and the importance of embracing identity
You did an amazing job with this poem! The way you express the struggles and strength of Black history is both powerful and inspiring. Your use of rhythm and rhyme really brings out the message, making it clear and impactful. It’s a great piece that encourages unity and empowerment.
This is bold and unapologetic—a call to action and a celebration of strength. It captures the struggle, resilience, and brilliance of Black history and power, urging unity and pride. These words radiate with determination and a vision for a brighter future. Powerful and inspiring.
Your poem is powerful and inspiring. It’s a bold call for unity and strength, honoring Black history and the incredible resilience of your community. Truly so motivating and inspiring! Thanks for sharing!
This poem is a powerful call for unity, pride, and progress in the Black community. It speaks about oppression’s struggles while celebrating Black people’s strength and greatness. The message inspires readers to embrace Black history, show courage, and work toward change.
This message is so powerful and leaves such an impact. I love the way you expressed your thoughts into these striking words. The rhyming and repetition was an amazing choice because it made the poem rhythm flow really well. Overall, it was just such a thoughtful and beautiful piece of writing! Thank you for sharing!