Achievement

By CR

People think that accomplishing something

Is nothing to them

But to me

Accomplishing or achieving something

Means a lot to me

Cuz I was the dumb one

Of all the kids my mom had

But when I accomplish something

I feel proud

4 Comments

  1. da on July 25, 2012 at 4:46 PM

    You got a good look at life bruh….stay optimistic and visual. You can obtain anything you want in life…keep your head and stay strong

  2. Andrew Christianson on May 3, 2020 at 9:31 PM

    CR,

    I love hearing stories like this because I can relate in a lot of ways. When I was in grade school, kids would often make fun of me and give me looks when I would get up and leave the room to learn in a smaller class because of my learning disabilities. They would tease me and I hated it. I made it my lifelong goal to prove them wrong and show them that I’m capable of so much more than what they assumed about me.

  3. TB on May 8, 2020 at 12:16 PM

    CR,

    The dumb ones always come out the strongest. Others are not as motivated as you. Keep accomplishing your goals as you will see your dream turn into reality.

  4. Anna Carpentiere on November 15, 2022 at 2:58 PM

    This poem is very well written and I feel the knowledge of the author behind their words. We all have achievements and things we want to accomplish in life, some might be the same as others and some might be unique; some might be small and some might be big. The thrill of achieving/accomplishing something is very fulfilling and makes you feel good. From the little things like turning in an assignment, to getting a bonus at work. Everyone has weaknesses and strengths just remember that. You got this and remember the best is yet to come!

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