Who Me?
By AG
How do I better myself?
Starve off comfortability
To create parity within
To accept my flaws
and be humble in my strengths
To feel relief in my win
A winner of freedom
Free at last
Freed from my past
I’ve been re-moved my mask
Not saying I’m fake
More so removing my ugly
To reveal my beauty
Essence of a man, a changed man
Who articulating a plan
To achieve to believe
I can, and will be a better me
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This poem shows how beautiful and progressive your mind has gotten. from the outside looking in it sounds like you have in fact become a changed man.
Hi AG! Your poem expresses a powerful desire for personal growth and transformation. There’s a raw honesty in your words, especially in acknowledging flaws, striving toward humility, and seeking liberation from your past. That kind of vulnerability is commendable, and the central message—becoming a better version of yourself—is relatable and inspiring. Keep writing!
I was so moved by reading your poem. You put into words so well something that I have been struggling with lately. Well, for a long time really. You have a gift for language and for using it to share really powerful insights. I hope so much that you will continue to write!
This poem really spoke to me and I think this was very well written and I am so glad that I was able to see something that truly spoke to me like no other poem ever has.
I resonate a lot with this poem and the feeling of wanting to grow as a person but not quite knowing the best way to do it. There is a lot of pressure from others to be a good person, but sometimes the pressure from yourself is the hardest to please. I enjoyed your poem and speaking on this matter so many people struggle with.
This poem is a powerful declaration of growth and transformation, reminding us that true strength comes from self-awareness and perseverance. It beautifully captures the courage it takes to confront your past and evolve into someone stronger and more authentic. Keep embracing your journey—because every step forward is proof that you can and will become the best version of yourself.
Your reflection on personal growth feels raw and genuine. The idea of “removing the ugly” to reveal beauty is powerful, like shedding past pain to become someone freer and stronger.
This poem does a great job showing someone’s journey of becoming a better version of themselves. It talks about letting go of comfort, facing flaws, and learning to appreciate both strengths and weaknesses. The idea of removing a mask is a strong image, showing how the person is no longer hiding who they really are but rather becoming comfortable with who they are, and who they are trying to be. The tone feels honest and hopeful, and the message is clear: change is hard, but it’s possible with effort and hope in yourself. Some phrases could be a little clearer or simpler, but overall, it’s a meaningful and inspiring piece of writing.
I like your poem a lot and I feel that it is easily relatable to many people. Since people are constantly changing over the course of their life, I think multiple lines in your poem would resinate with them.
Hi AG,
I love your use of repetition in the poem, especially “to create parity within/to accept my flaws” and “free at last/freed from my past.” It really adds to the hopeful tone of the poem and puts emphasis on the things that are the most important.
Great job 🙂
“Your poem is truly inspiring! I love how it captures the journey of self-discovery and the powerful process of shedding the masks we wear. The message of embracing both our flaws and strengths while striving to be a better version of ourselves resonates deeply. You’ve beautifully expressed the idea of freedom through self-acceptance and growth. Keep sharing your powerful words; they are a true reflection of inner strength and transformation!”
I like this poem a lot! I think your use of different wording to insinuate a theme of freedom is very impactful towards those often feeling trapped by their past or current situations. The tone of this poem is very chilling, and I really enjoy the word choice used to convey the message of self-discovery and freedom.
Dear Author,
Your poem is a heartfelt and very inspiring reflection on personal growth and self-transformation. The way you frame self-improvement as a journey of shedding comfort, embracing flaws, and finding humility in strengths is both relatable and uplifting. Lines like “Starve off comfortability” and “Freed from my past” do a great job at capturing the courage it takes to break free from old patterns and strive for a better self. The imagery of removing the “mask” to reveal your “beauty” feels deeply authentic, showing a powerful shift from hiding imperfections to embracing your true essence. Your closing lines, with their determined resolve to “achieve to believe,” resonate as a stirring call to action for anyone seeking change. I think the hardest part in the end is to believe, because believing in something take courage and a leap of faith. Thank you for sharing such a moving and motivating piece—it’s a beautiful testament to the strength of a changed man.
The poem explores self-empowerment and personal change, challenging gender norms and embracing authenticity. It encourages embracing beauty and worth, viewing the past as a part of human experience. The phrase “Essence of a man, a changed man” suggests a deeper understanding of positive masculinity, focusing on supporting women and marginalized genders. The poem serves as a starting point for further contemplation and questioning.
I greatly appreciate this poem for its ability to convey themes of liberation, strength, and personal growth. It particularly resonates with me in the section that discusses taking off a mask. This imagery could suggest the powerful act of uncovering a new aspect of ourselves that we may have concealed due to negative influences, such as fears or past mistakes. This process can lead to a sense of liberation and self-discovery, helping us break free from the constraints of our past and embrace our authentic selves.
This poem really moved me. The line “Not saying I’m fake / More so removing my ugly / To reveal my beauty” stood out. It shows so much honesty and growth. I think your message about taking off emotional armor and learning to see your worth is something many people, especially men, aren’t always allowed to express. It made me think about the feminist idea that healing and self-love are also acts of resistance.
Wow, this poem is really deep! It’s like you’re talking about going from being stuck to finding your true self. I love how you say you’re taking off your mask to show the real you. It’s inspiring!
This poem makes me think about how we all go through tough times but can come out stronger. The part where you say you’re ‘free at last’ really stands out. It’s like you’re saying we can all change for the better.
This poem powerfully explores personal growth and self-discovery, using honest and emotional language to reflect on overcoming the past and striving for a better self. I especially enjoy the rhythm and momentum building towards the ending. While the message is strong, a few lines could be clearer grammar and have better transitions. Overall, it’s a heartfelt and inspiring piece that describes the journey of change.
Hi! I really liked your poem. The diction is so unique which really added to the work. Words like “parity” added to the variety and made it very engaging. I also like the flow of this poem, the way in which you craft a story that progresses as it goes on. I think the tone and perspective helped to move this story, using almost a back and forth style within the writing – as well as your unique voice – added to the overall product! Your poem was also really moving overall – the message at the end as you explain your sense of self and improvement made me really consider how I too view myself. Thank you!
AG this poem speaks loudly to me. It is all about attaining one’s genuine self. I love the line about accepting flaws and being free from your past. This is powerful self-actualization. Very inspiring. Please keep writing!
AG this poem is excellent. Self-improvement is a powerful force and I see this theme run through the poem very strongly. It is a good reminder to keep our humility, be authentic, and push ourselves out of any comfort zones. Very inspirational. Please keep up the good writing!
I love how there is so much accountability in this piece. At the start of this poem you question how to better yourself, but by the end you express this feeling like no matter the circumstances you will achieve a better version of yourself. There is so much strength in accountability, but simultaneously choosing to better yourself is commendable. I wish you well on your journey to betterment.
I love the way that you start the poem with a question that you answer throughout the poem. The line “starve off comfortability to create parity within” is so vivid and amazing. The rhythm of the lines “Free at last — free from my past” is beautiful and emphasizes the meaning. Thank you for your words.
This poem feels hopeful and personal, like it’s about someone learning to grow and accept themselves. I like how it talks about removing the mask and finding beauty underneath, because it shows real change and honesty. The lines about freedom and becoming a better person make it uplifting and inspiring.
This poem feels very honest and inspiring. It shows the struggle of self-growth—facing flaws, letting go of the past, and working to become a better version of yourself. The message of transformation and hope really shines through.
This is really inspiring and honest. I like how it shows growth, self-reflection, and the journey of becoming better. The mix of strength and vulnerability makes it powerful and uplifting.
This poem feels like it’s an honest reflection on growth. It follows the authors journey of self-growth. It shows the struggle of facing flaws and overcoming the weight of things from the past. The poem is very hopeful. The author is determined to embrace change and to step fully into their true self.
I really love this poem because it shows someone working hard to grow and change. It’s about facing flaws, letting go of the past, and finding real strength. In the end, it’s hopeful and about believing in becoming better.
This piece is really inspiring. I like how it shows growth through honesty about flaws and strengths. It carries a strong message of hope and self-transformation.
This poem captures growth and self-reflection with honesty, showing the courage it takes to shed old layers and embrace change. I liked how you balanced vulnerability with determination. Well done.
Your reflection on personal growth feels really resonates with me. The battle between accepting who you are and trying to improve is very relevant.
This is powerful—raw yet hopeful. I really like how you turned vulnerability into strength and showed growth as a process of peeling back layers. Very inspiring!
I really like the honesty and growth that comes through in this poem. The way you describe removing the mask and finding beauty beneath it feels very powerful and relatable. I also appreciate how you balance humility with strength, acknowledging both flaws and wins. The ending lines about believing in yourself and working toward becoming better leave a hopeful and motivating message. It feels like a genuine journey of self-improvement and transformation.
This piece has such a raw honesty. It balances struggle with hope compellingly. The imagery of “removing the mask” doesn’t read as weakness but as courage, a willingness to face flaws and move forward. I like how it frames bettering the self as perfection, growth, humility, belief, and freedom from the past. It feels like both confession and affirmation.
Powerful reflection on growth and self-acceptance, I admire the raw honesty and determination in your words.
I really enjoyed this piece — it has such an honest and uplifting message. I like how you show the process of growth, from facing flaws to finding strength and freedom. The part about removing the mask really stood out, because it shows how becoming your true self can reveal real beauty. The whole poem feels hopeful and inspiring, and I love the way it ends with determination to keep becoming better.
I really enjoy this poem. I think a lot of people really do struggle with this sense of identity. For me, especially as a student, I feel like its hard to stand out and really understand who I am as a person while simultaneously dealing with a constant pressure to fit in. It gets harder and harder to feel good about yourself when it feels like other people are leaps and bounds ahead, but I love how this poem deals with accountability and helping one get better.
Your poem sends a message that resonates with a lot of people. We are always trying to seek a new version of ourselves. The way you put that feeling into words is amazing, moving, and graceful.
There is so much power in the phrases and expressions you used in your poem. I love where you wrote about accepting one’s flaws. This poem is very inspiring, and relatable to many. Keep on expressing yourself and encouraging yourself to be the best version you can be. Stay strong and sending positive vibes to you.
Off first read, I like how the author talks about accountability. “To accept my flaws
and be humble in my strengths”, I believe to become better you must first see your flaws and improve based on that. The poem expresses going all in on change in order to become the best you possible. I resonate with this poem a lot. It is hopeful and encourages self growth.
I really liked this poem, it feels super real and honest. The part about taking off the mask and finding your true self really stood out to me. The message about believing in yourself and becoming better hits hard, and the flow makes it easy to connect with.
This poem is amazing and beautifully written. It shows how one stays true to themselves and better themselves. Thank you for sharing this great piece. I really enjoyed reading it.
I love how it’s all about growing, accepting yourself, and becoming your best version. Lines like “Freed from my past / I’ve been re-moved my mask” are so powerful they show that the poet is letting go of old struggles and revealing their true self. It’s a reminder that self-improvement isn’t just about winning or achieving but about being honest, humble, and confident in your own journey.
Hey AG, I thought your poem perfectly captures the journey you take when trying to heal and do self-improvement. Your poem feels hopeful, empowering, and a bit solemn. The line “to accept my flaws and be humble in my strength” really stands out in the poem. It shows emotional maturity and real authenticity. I also think you had a very strong closing to your poem. The line “I can, and will be a better me” gives the poem a sense of confidence and a happy ending.
This poem does a great job of expressing self change. I find this very encouraging as all of us are changing human beings. None of us are perfect in any way. We have to learn from our mistakes and reflect on ourselves and I think this poem does a great job of doing just that.
Great work AG
*“Who Me?” is a powerful and uplifting reflection on growth, self-acceptance, and transformation. The poem captures the struggle of shedding the past and embracing inner change with honesty and strength. Lines like “Not saying I’m fake, more so removing my ugly to reveal my beauty” stand out as deeply human and hopeful. It’s an inspiring piece that celebrates becoming the best version of oneself.*
This poem feels real and personal; it shows growth, accountability, and self-reflection. I like how you focus on change from the inside out, especially the line about removing the mask, “not saying I’m fake, more so removing my ugly.” That hits hard because it’s honest and vulnerable. You can really feel the determination in your words; it’s not just about wanting to do better, it’s about becoming better. It’s powerful and motivating without trying too hard, just straight from the heart.
This poem is genuinely a fascinating read, especially when you understand that the poet is within a prison. It shows that even within such a horrible place lies hope for a better self, and in turn, a better future. It is great to hear such optimism, even if there is no concrete idea on how to do so, because that is the truth. No matter how badly we want to grow as a person, we are aimless. We just have to brainstorm and try. Very nice read overall.
That’s a powerful poem! It’s so inspiring to see someone embracing change and striving for self improvement. It takes courage to confront your flaws, and I’m sure many people can relate to the desire to be a better version of themselves.
Hi AG,
I really love the depth of your poem. I love how you are articulating how you are changing and embracing that change. How you are accepting the past that you cannot change, but using that in order to be a better person. Keep staying encouraged and seeking to be a better person for yourself and those connected to you!
I love this poem a lot, how you express your feelings and desires about becoming a better person. It’s amazing, we all strive to be better versions of ourselves and we are definitely capable if we try. Never stop working towards your goals!
I love this poem. It really shows a desire for growth and transformation. It also shows some vulnerability. Wanting to change from the past, wanting to be different in others eyes as well as your own. Thank you for sharing.
I loved how at the end you’re saying that you can be and will be better! In the beginning you’re asking how you can be better, but at the end you’re positive that you can be a new and better man! That’s amazing! We all can struggle with how to better ourselves and I am so happy you’re positive that you’re going to be able to! I’m praying for you!
I like how honest this is it’s not about perfection, it’s about progress. The line “starve off comfortability” really captures what real change takes.
You’ve written something that captures the inner work of growth: confronting comfort, embracing imperfection, and striving toward freedom and authenticity.
I love your poem and the way you wrote your feelings. This poem shows an immense amount of strength and courage to become a better person. The way you express yourself and your journey through words is inspiring. Continue becoming the best version of you. You got it!
I like this — it really feels like someone talking to their own reflection and choosing growth instead of running from it. The “starve off comfortability” part hits, because change only happens when you stop settling. This reads like you’re owning your past and your potential at the same time.
Who Me? is an authentic reflection on transformation — raw, introspective, and ultimately uplifting. It captures the courage of self-awareness and the quiet strength in personal change. With a few adjustments to flow and phrasing, it could become even more impactful, especially if read aloud or performed.
I really appreciate this poem and the honesty in your writing—it feels raw and genuine. The way you describe growth and self-acceptance makes the message powerful and easy to connect with.
Omg, this poem is genuinely so real and inspiring! I love how you’re all about facing your flaws but also owning your strengths. The way you talk about shedding your mask and finding freedom? So powerful. That line, “I can, and will be a better me,” honestly gives me chills. Keep going with this honesty and growth, it’s seriously motivating.
This poem reflects a sincere journey toward self-improvement and healing. The speaker confronts the past, embraces vulnerability, and discovers strength through honesty. It’s a testament to transformation — finding beauty in growth and freedom in becoming one’s true self.
This is such a powerful poem, and i love how you express wanting to be better and accepting who you were before setting the goal of achieving a better version of yourself. I love this and i think you are capable of anything you set your mind to! I believe in you!
Hi AG,
I love the messages being incorporated. I can only imagine how insecure one can feel. This proves to be a pivotal moment where we show how much we have grown and changed throughout this time. However, a sad thing is that certain people will always have stereotypes to act on, however, none of those thoughts can change the reality of a changed man.
Hi AG! This poem shows real courage in wanting to grow and become better.You talk honestly about removing old pain to reveal inner strength and beauty. It’s an inspiring message about change, self-belief, and becoming the best version of yourself. This is so great, excellent job!
Your poem does a great job capturing the process of self-growth and honesty that comes with trying to become a better version of yourself. I like how you show that improvement isn’t just about confidence but also about facing flaws, letting go of old habits, and being willing to step out of comfort. The shift from “removing my mask” to revealing inner beauty is powerful, because it frames change as something internal and genuine rather than performative. The poem has a hopeful tone that builds toward the final lines, where believing in yourself becomes part of the transformation. It feels sincere, vulnerable, and determined, and that makes the message resonate.
Your poem captures the courage it takes to face yourself honestly and grow. The transformation you describe feels real and hard-won, showing strength, vulnerability, and hope. It’s a powerful reminder that becoming better is a choice made every day—beautifully expressed.
I really enjoyed how this poem explores self-discovery. The imagery of removing a mask to reveal your true self was powerful, and it felt like a journey from struggle to freedom. I find it to be so relatable.
This poem captures the vulnerable but powerful process of self-growth, showing how honesty and discomfort become pathways to transformation. Its voice is hopeful and grounded, ending with a strong affirmation of becoming someone new and intentional.
This is a really powerful and strong poem. I can see the emotions and yearning to grow as a person to better yourself through your words. I admire your determination to grow and better yourself. This is a topic many people can relate to but not many people act on. Keep writing this is a beautiful piece.
I love this. I can resonate with what you’ve written, it’s scary and hard to change, to be better. I know it’ll be
worth it, but it IS hard to lose comfort. I know that it will pay off for the both of us in the end. 🙂
This poem has a really honest, self-reflective energy—it feels like someone talking themselves through growth in real time. I like how you balance vulnerability (“removing my ugly”) with confidence in who you’re becoming, which makes the journey feel earned. Overall, it reads like a pep talk wrapped in poetry, and the ending lands with a hopeful, forward-moving vibe.
This poem feels honest and hopeful. The way it talks about growth—shedding old layers, owning flaws, and finding confidence again—is really powerful. It’s a reminder that change is messy but beautiful, and becoming your best self is real work.
I feel like these are thoughts and feelings that one feels mostly in their twenties with the pressure to find yourself and be at a certain point in your life when in reality, everyone is at different points in their lives. I also like the world play of “starve off comfortability”. I interpreted this as getting out of your comfort zone and straying from laziness which is something I feel like I am struggling with as with many different parts of this poem. At this point in my life, in some ways I feel like I can relate.
This poem powerfully reflects on self-improvement and the courage it takes to confront flaws, shed masks, and grow. The rhythm and repetition create momentum, mirroring the speaker’s determination to change. It leaves a strong impression of resilience, humility, and hope.
I really connected with the idea of “removing my mask” to reveal one’s true self. The poem captures personal growth in such a raw, honest way acknowledging flaws while celebrating strengths. I also like how it frames change as intentional and empowering, showing that becoming a better self takes both reflection and action.
I love this poem! The way that you express wanting to grow as a person and to “remove the ugly” was inspirational. It shows the challenge of wanted to change and finding your true self. Thank you for this poem!
Hi AG, this poem is so beautiful because it also affects people who are not in the system. I can relate with trying to be a better person and actively working on it. This poem is so amazing because it is something we all relate to and connects all of us even when we have not been through what you have. God bless.
This poem tells a beautiful story of self-reflection and betterment, something that I link resonates with a lot of people regardless of context. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry!
Your poem was so beautiful and moving. The word choice really spoke out to me as you probed with such deep questions. I loved how you explored growth, reflection and the struggles you have experienced. Keep writing!
The reflective, self-questioning tone makes the growth feel earned, and the movement from shedding the past to claiming freedom gives the ending a strong sense of resolve and hope.
The honest self-examination and imagery of removing a mask make the transformation feel genuine, with a clear sense of determination to grow into a better, freer version of oneself.
I like how this poem feels like someone really reflecting on themselves and trying to grow. The questions at the beginning make it feel honest, like the speaker doesn’t have everything figured out but actually wants to change. I especially liked the line about “re-moved my mask” — it shows transformation without saying the person was fake, just that they’re letting go of the parts they don’t like. There’s a strong theme of freedom and growth throughout, especially with “Freed from my past.” By the end, it feels confident and motivated, like the speaker truly believes they can become a better version of themselves. It feels hopeful and real at the same time.
Hello,
I really do like this poem for the themes of trying to be a better person. It shows growth of how you’re trying to grow past of who you were Into the now of who you are. We can’t escape our past but we can learn and grow from it and I feel like you were trying to show that in this poem. I think you did an amazing job.
HI AG, Great poem! It deeply touched me. Thank you. Keep writing.
This poem has such a grounded, honest energy to it. It feels like someone is really taking a moment to look inward and recognize both where they’ve been and where they’re trying to go. The shift from struggle to confidence is powerful, especially the lines about revealing beauty and becoming a “better me.”
This poem feels honest and hopeful. It shows someone working on themselves, letting go of the past, and choosing growth. I like how it ends with confidence, believing they can and will become a better version of themselves.
This poem really shows someone who’s done some deep, honest thinking about themselves. The idea of giving up comfort to grow is so true.
What stood out most was the mask image. Removing it not because you were fake, but to let your best self show through. That’s a powerful way to put it!
And that ending hits hard. “I can, and will be a better me” sounds like a promise you’ve already made to yourself. You can feel the confidence in it. Keep writing!
The part of the poem the spoke to me the most is the very beginning, the opening two lines of the poem: How do I better myself? Starve off comfortability. I think these lines in and of itself are very self-reflective and give a lot to think about in terms of interpretation and how these aligns with how I see myself and navigate growth and self-betterment.
Your poem explores becoming a better version of yourself by letting go of comfort, facing flaws, and embracing growth. The tone feels reflective, determined, and hopeful. It reads like a personal promise or transformation.
This poem shows real growth and honesty. I like how you talk about removing the mask and finding your true self. It takes strength to face your flaws and still believe in becoming better. Your determination really comes through in these lines.
AG, this poem really made me think about myself. “Removing my ugly”, what a powerful phrase. Sometimes we need to remove our barriers, the insecurities that hold us back. Allowing us to change and feel free to show who we really are, even with our flaws.
Your poem shows real honesty and growth. I like how you talk about removing the mask, not because you were fake, but because you’re finally seeing your true worth. The shift from struggle to freedom is powerful, and your determination to become a better version of yourself really stands out. It feels like you’re stepping into a new chapter with clarity and purpose.
Hi AG, I really like how honest this poem is about self-growth. The idea of removing a mask and becoming better stood out to me. It shows change and strength. It made me think about how hard but important it is to face yourself and grow. This feels real and inspiring
I particularly liked how the poem expresses self improvement through struggle like “starving to get out of your comfort zone” and accepting your imperfections along with your strong characteristics, and showing that it is not easy to improve oneself, yet self improvement is possible if one works hard and takes responsibility for improving themselves. Also, I found the concept of balancing humility and confidence to be expressed very well.
This poem is really powerful, accepting yourself but not falling into conformity feels like a really thin balance that can fall into both ways. But that sentence ” free at last, free from my past”. Gives that feeling of hope for a better future and a better self. Thank you.
This poem feels like a powerful reflection on growth and self-discipline. I was especially drawn to the line “starve off comfortability,” because it highlights how change often requires discomfort and intentional effort. The movement from questioning “How do I better myself?” to confidently stating “I can, and will be a better me” shows a meaningful shift toward self-belief and accountability. I also found the idea of “removing my mask” interesting—not as being fake, but as shedding parts of yourself that no longer serve you. It made me think about how personal growth is both about accepting flaws and actively working to improve. Thank you for sharing such an honest and motivating piece.
AG, I especially love how the poem just flows, thank you so much!
Dear AG:
In this poem, you touch on something incredibly important: how we, as humans, grow and persevere. You tell a story of resilience and deep reflection, that most cannot achieve. It is so impressive how you were able to take your unique, personal experiences, and synthesize them to create a beautiful piece of poetry that has the potential to inspire others to follow their own path of growth.
Hi AG! Truly, your words are powerful. I really like when you differentiate between being fake and “removing my ugly” to reveal something beautiful. It takes a lot to say something like that. Growth will never be the same as being fake.
We gain nothing from wallowing. We cannot let the pain of the past bind us down and keep us stuck in our ways. All we can do is move forward and improve. You’ve recognized that. Keep up what you’re doing! I’ll be rooting for you!
Hi AG. Your poem is powerful and honest. It takes courage to face your path and to want to choose growth. The way you describe removing your mask to show your true self is powerful imagery and deeply moving. I hope you continue to write and share your beautiful words with the world.
This poem really highlights the flaws in society which negatively impact who you become. What I really admired about this poem was your ability to capture the raw and personal feeling of wanting to do better- to be a better person. This exemplifies how throughout life we lose track of who we are or who we used to be, our personalities’ further and further deteriorating as we stumble through life. Your usage of the word “re-moved” both indicates that they had continuosly changed themself, masking their flaws and habits which define who they are, their identity moving and shifting as they go through life. It also displays how in order to find their truth self they had to remove the identities which they had layered overtop each other, peeling back each mask to reveal their true self.
This poem has a great sense of honesty and self-reflection. I really liked the wordplay in the line “I’ve been re-moved my mask.” It suggests that removing a mask is an ongoing process of renewal. Your use of contrasting ideas, like “starve off comfortability” to “create parity,” shows a lot of maturity and a commitment to growth. Great work!
I believe the rhyme of the poem really contributes to the rhythm, bouncing through difficult ideas. The rhymes additionally coupled with assonance in many of the lines create an internal rhyme that adds to the sophistication of this poem. Thank you for sharing.
I love this poem and your exploration of the complexity in identity and human experience. This is an important subject matter, so thank you for touching upon it in your poetry! Your use of rhyming particularly stands out to me in this poem. Thank you for writing this!
“Who Me?” really stood out to me because it feels honest and personal, like someone thinking out loud about who they are and who they want to become. The poem shows that self-improvement is not easy, especially in the line “Starve off comfortability,” because growth usually means pushing yourself outside of what feels safe. I also liked the idea of removing the “mask,” not because the speaker was fake, but because they are learning to let go of insecurity and reveal their true self. The repetition of freedom throughout the poem makes it feel like the speaker is finally moving on from parts of the past that held them back. Overall, the poem reminded me that becoming a better person is a process that takes honesty, confidence, and the willingness to change, and that is something almost everyone can relate to.