The Beauty Found in Unexpected Places
By AHA
When you look up at the sky, what do you see?
Beauty at different times of the night and day,
in lightness or darkness,
it’s a place of beauty existing so far away.
Bright lights, stars in skies
that one can only imagine how it looks up close,
but how the creator created such beauty in an unexpected place
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AHA this is such a wonderful way to explain how every aspect of life can be beautiful. Even in the most unexpected areas of life, the creator has brought us so much beauty. Being able to appreciate all kinds of beauty and expressing it in this way is in fact beautiful.
This poem made me feel very appreciative of everything around me and nature. I really liked how “day” and “away” rhyme as well as how “in lightness or darkness” and “bright lights, stars in skies” are separated to emphasize the beauty that is all around us. It is interesting that you use the word “unexpected” and expanding on this might be helpful to juxtapose why we do not expect/realize the beauty that is all around us. The poem is lighthearted and made me feel happy so keep up the good work!
This piece beautifully encapsulates the awe and wonder of looking up at the sky. It reminds us of the ever-changing beauty that exists above us, whether in the light of day or the dark of night. The imagery of distant stars and the sense of mystery behind the creation of such splendor evoke a deep appreciation for the universe’s hidden wonders. It’s a gentle reminder of how the simplest act of looking up can fill us with awe and inspiration.
The pursuit of something grand and beautiful can sometimes hide the beauty in what’s hiding in plain sight.
What a beautiful finish by mentioning a creator, gave me chills!
I love this poem and the way it praises something which is often not paid attention to but is always present. It emphasizes the importance of finding beauty in the finer things in the world. It is also very thought provoking, especially the last two lines, making readers imagine how it must look from up close, and how it is so beautiful anywhere you go. Besides for potentially better capitalization, it is a beautiful poem and creates importance in something which is not always appreciated.
This poem captures the wonder of the sky beautifully, inviting readers to appreciate its beauty at any time. The imagery of stars and the sense of awe about creation evoke a strong sense of curiosity and admiration for the universe.
This is such a sweet poem! There is such a sense of appreciation in this poem of things that we normally take for granted. Looking up at the sky is something we do naturally but we never think of the hidden beauty within it, something that you have wonderfully done.
Beautifully written!
This poetry evokes strong feelings and vivid images while deftly capturing the beauty of the sky. Every line invites readers to stop and take in the wonder above by dancing like clouds. incredibly inspiring and entrancing!
This poem beautifully reflects on the wonder and awe of finding beauty in places we might not always expect. The sky serves as a metaphor for the distant, unreachable aspects of life, yet it holds a constant, mysterious beauty that exists regardless of time or light. The contrast between “lightness or darkness” reminds us that beauty can be found in both bright and shadowed moments, even in places that feel far away or unattainable. The imagery of stars, which are distant yet awe-inspiring, suggests that there is much we may never fully understand but can still appreciate. The closing lines bring a sense of reverence for creation, emphasizing the marvel in how beauty exists even in the unexpected. This poem offers a thoughtful reminder to look beyond the obvious and appreciate the subtle wonders around us.
I really resonate with this poem because I also like looking at the sky and admiring its beauty. It is interesting to admire nature because it is so unique and out of our reach but often looks better than anything else we could make ourselves.
This poem beautifully captures the awe and mystery of the sky and reminds me of the distant yet mesmerizing stars. I’ve always been curious about astronomy and what lies in and beyond our galaxy!
Your words beautifully capture the wonder of looking at the sky—a boundless reminder of beauty beyond reach, yet so present in our lives. The contrast of light and darkness, close and far, brings out how vast and mysterious creation truly is. It’s like each star holds a story we can only dream of knowing, yet we feel connected to it all the same. Thank you for sharing such a thoughtful reflection on something so infinite.
When you look up at the sky, it truly is a sight to behold. Whether it’s the vibrant colors of a sunset or the twinkling stars at night, there’s a sense of wonder in how such beauty exists so far away. The sky is a canvas painted by the creator, filled with light and darkness, offering a glimpse into the vastness of the universe. It’s amazing to think about how all these elements come together to create something so breathtaking and awe-inspiring.
To AHA, I believe we share a likeness to observe and appreciate the little things around us and you’ve seemed to capture the littleness, the softness in explicit detail. I too enjoy the sky, the night, and other things like the moon and pastel colors. Your writing is beautiful, never forget it.
This is such a beautiful sentiment and experience to write about, and you do an equally beautiful job of capturing it. As someone who adores space myself, it’s so nice to read about its beauty. Thank you for sharing!
Love this piece! Beauty often comes from surprising places such as everyday objects.
This is a beautiful poem! The way you are able to identify the beauty in all things and articulate it so well is admirable. It made me feel as though I should recognize the beauty in the small things, so I will definitely do this moving forward. Keep on writing!
Your poem captures the beauty and mystery of the sky. It shows how the sky amazes us both day and night. The stars and lights make us wonder about the creator’s work.
This poem was well written and beautifully done. I loved the shortness of it because it brought out the “sweetness” of it even more. The way we oftentimes get to used to looking and seeing the same thing everyday in life (like the sky), that we don’t think about how encapsulating and wonderful it really is. Your poem captured just that feeling of awe in which we should still feel when we gaze up. I also am a very religious person and try to appreciate the beauty in nature and this world God created. This was poem that leaves you with a warm feeling and I love that. Keep doing what you’re doing!
I love how nature and the real world was connected into this. Nice!
I loved reading your poem. I like how you recognized that there is both beauty in darkness and in light. Beauty can be seen both up close and far away. I think it is important to know that there is beauty in many different things and you can see a beautiful aspect in that. Mentioning the creator resonates with hearts and souls, you did an amazing job.
AHA, when reading this, it brought me back to my childhood. Being so innocent, looking up at the sky, so much imagination. This poem is very powerful, and it opened my eyes to the other values in life. Sometimes it is so easy to be angry and upset at others around you, and at those who hurt you, but at the end of the day, we all stand under the same stars. The same moon. The same sky. Thank you for sharing.
Your poem beautifully captures the wonder and mystery of the sky. It’s a reminder of how much beauty exists, even in places we can’t fully reach or understand. The way you reflect on the creator’s work adds a thoughtful touch. Thank you for sharing this inspiring perspective!
This poem is a powerful reminder that no matter how tough life gets, there’s always hope for a better tomorrow. Even when facing unimaginable struggles, the human spirit remains resilient. The way dreams of freedom, love, and peace are woven into the lines shows that no matter the circumstances, we have the strength to keep going. It’s a beautiful message that no matter where we are, we can still dream, grow, and hold on to the belief that a brighter future is ahead. Keep moving forward, because better days are always on the horizon.
This poem elegantly captures the beauty of the world we live in. It shows how beauty can be found in every little aspect of this world.
Your poem made me think about the beauty in nature. I loved the line, “Bright lights, stars in skies / that one can only imagine how it looks up close.” It shows how much wonder there is in the things we can’t fully understand.
The idea of finding beauty in unexpected places is powerful. It reminds me to appreciate what’s around us.
AHA, as someone who has always had a fascination with astronomy, this poem speaks greatly! Your writing captures the beauty and spirituality of space. Please keep writing!
Wonderfully written! Thank you for sharing! It is true that beauty is found in the most unexpected places. The line about wondering what the sky and the stars look like up close show how truly amazing nature is and how the simplest things bring so much wonder to us due to the simple fact that we cant understand the full concept of them.
Your poem reminds us of the beauty and mystery that exists beyond our reach. The way you describe the contrast between lightness and darkness, as well as the stars shining from afar, adds depth and a sense of awe. Thank you for sharing such a peaceful and thought-provoking piece.
The message I took away is how we can find beauty in anywhere in anything, especially in nature. I love how you incorporated that into the wording of your poem. I think it is so important to look for beauty in difficult times, and this poem is such an encouraging reminder of that.
The message of this poem inspires us to take control of our lives and embrace the beauty of each moment, no matter how fleeting.
I enjoyed reading this poem and the message delivered was really good. I liked how you showed us through your poem that beauty can be found in unexpected places. Overall, great work!
I enjoyed reading your poem and enjoyed knowing how you were feeling when you were writing this. It’s short but strikes the message right there. The opening line does it! When I look up at the sky I think about a lot of things, not just the physical things that are in the sky, and that the world has a lot going on, and a lot to offer, some good, some bad, and that no matter what it is, it all comes back to it being about beauty and where it started. Like you wrote beauty in unexpected place, it truly can be and that no matter the case, its about taking that from the situation. Good job on this!
I love how this poem grasps the beauty in the “simple” things. The most unexpected places are full of their own character and that is where the beauty lies.
Your poem is simple yet profound, reminding us to find beauty in places we might overlook. The imagery of the sky and stars creates a sense of wonder, making the reader pause and appreciate the vastness of creation. Lovely piece!
AHA, your piece eloquently conveys the wonder of discovering beauty in unexpected locations. The sky is a potent metaphor of both distance and connection since it is both constant and ever-changing. Your remarks bring to recall those silent times when we stop to consider something greater than ourselves. The notion that there is beauty even in the dark is particularly poignant; it serves as a gentle reminder that there is light and wonder everywhere. Your poetry evokes awe, a deep breath, and a respect for the invisible.
This is something I deeply resonate with. It is so important to find the beauty in the small things of life. When you look at the sky, it is truly amazing how this was able to be created out of nothingness. It appears as if it was always there. Who dare make such a perfect world? Thank you for sharing this.
This is very inspiring! It exemplifies the need to understand how beauty is apparent even in the dark and is hidden in every nook. Beauty can also be unexpected especially when further away, making it a hidden gem that many would want to uncover and explore.
This poem shows how beauty exists everywhere, even in places we don’t expect, like the sky. It reminds us to appreciate both light and darkness. The stars feel distant, but their beauty is still a wonder. Simple and thoughtful!
This is such a great take on looking at the world. You can truly find beauty in everything, even the unexpected. I also liked the contrast of finding the beauty in both the light and dark, showing that if you look for it there’s always some hope!
The imagery of stars and distant lights shows that there is more to the universe and the world than what we can see, touch, hear, and smell, and creates nature to be a place of solitude through the comforting language used.
Thank you for this lovely poem. Your poem makes me see the sky in a different way. Our sky is so beautiful in all its differences. There is beauty in the bright sky, dark sky, gloomy sky, and so much more. Your poem encourages me to find the beauty in the smaller things of our world. Thank you for sharing!
This poem uses such beautiful imagery to show how everything this world has for us is worth being appreciated. The line ‘in lightness or darkness’ symbolizes how the writer looks for beauty in the bad and the good times in their life. This really inspires readers to appreciate everything that goes unseen around us.
This poem really made me appreciate everything around me, especially nature. I loved how the word choice has the ability to highlight the beauty that surrounds us. I also found it interesting that you use the word “unexpected” — expanding on this idea could add depth by exploring why we don’t always notice or expect the beauty around us. The poem has a light, joyful tone that made me feel happy. I enjoyed reading this poem and hope to hear more!
I love this perspective!
I feel many people don’t pay true attention to what they’re doing nowadays, unfortunately, but they should. I feel like more people should read your poem to relearn how to find the good, the beauty in everyday things and not just those that stick out.
This is a beautiful and reflective poem! The way you explore the sky as a source of beauty, whether in light or darkness, is calming and thought-provoking. The idea of beauty existing in “unexpected places” resonates deeply, reminding us to appreciate what’s around us, even if its hard to fully comprehend.