Solitude and Silence

By MP

Solitude — Silence
Solitude can be good.
Isolation for a long time creates loneliness.
Loneliness for even a short period can cause harm
Solitude is the state of being alone.
Alone means without anyone else. Solo.
Solo means alone in Español.
Alone can be good until you become a loner.
Loner means one that avoids others.
Being that this person “avoids”, they are then
seeking to gain solitude.
In finding this isolation one has found their calm.

Silence — Solitude
Silence can be good.
Silence can be that noise is muted.
Silence can also mean there is no noise at all.
Silence can be a privilege and punishment.
The same as poison, silence can sicken if used wrongly.
Noise can be bliss just as silence is golden.
Is it noise or music?
Is it quiet enough?
Silently, I yearn for solitude amongst chaos.
Loudly, I tell those that accompany me to leave me to be alone
And companionship is precious just like noise can be bliss so I seek peace.
What, when and where is peace?

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19 Comments

  1. Shivansh Mittal on September 13, 2024 at 12:53 PM

    It is interesting to see the pros and cons of both solitude and silence. I’ve never thought of silence as anything but a good thing but to others, it may seem harmful. Why are they alone? why is it so quiet? I guess one needs a good mix of both.

  2. Vansh Dharmesh Jariwala on September 21, 2024 at 9:21 PM

    This poem beautifully captures the peace found in solitude and silence, reminding us that both can be calming and restorative. It’s a lovely reflection on finding balance and embracing quiet moments amid life’s noise.

  3. Allan on September 22, 2024 at 7:39 AM

    Profound exploration of being alone!

  4. Korielle M on September 26, 2024 at 7:12 PM

    “I yearn for solitude amongst chaos” very beautiful line. I hope you keep writing like this. I support you all the way!

  5. sania on October 3, 2024 at 6:37 PM

    This poem explores the complex relationship between solitude and silence, balancing their benefits and downsides.

  6. Mike on October 4, 2024 at 4:58 PM

    Good stuff, MP. I like how you walk us thru solitude and silence, from definition to more provoking thoughts about their impact and interpretation by us. Please keep up the great writing!

  7. TH on October 6, 2024 at 10:43 AM

    This is a very deep poem! The conflicts between being alone and being lonely, silence and noise, isolating for peace and its harms, solitude and isolation, and companionship is very interesting. I like the way you have framed this poem as well and hope that you find an answer about the balance between these soon!

  8. Lucas on October 8, 2024 at 7:49 PM

    This poem offers a contemplative exploration of the duality between solitude and silence. The speaker reflects on the delicate balance between finding peace in being alone and the potential harm of prolonged isolation. The distinction between solitude and loneliness is thoughtfully conveyed, with solitude described as a choice for calm, while loneliness is an unwanted state that can be damaging. The repetition of “Silence — Solitude” emphasizes their interconnectedness, while the poem acknowledges that both can be beneficial or harmful depending on the context. The line “Silence can be a privilege and punishment” is particularly striking, showing how something as simple as quiet can hold different meanings—freedom or suffering. The poem’s philosophical tone, especially in its final musings about peace, leaves the reader with an open-ended question about where true tranquility can be found. It’s a thoughtful meditation on the fine line between solitude as refuge and isolation as peril.

  9. Travis on October 20, 2024 at 4:13 PM

    This poem explores the nuanced relationship between solitude and silence, effectively capturing their complexities.

  10. Tim Kuang on October 20, 2024 at 11:55 PM

    This poem explores the delicate balance between solitude and silence, which is a very unique comparison. It reflects on the duality of being alone, which can bring calm and clarity, but may also lead to loneliness and isolation.

  11. Yuna on October 21, 2024 at 12:45 PM

    The repetition in this is so powerful. Amazing writing, it offers an interesting new perception on silence, something that is not often thought about.

  12. Emily on October 31, 2024 at 2:37 PM

    I also find beauty in silence. Thank you for sharing

  13. Olivia H on November 3, 2024 at 3:36 PM

    Your thoughts on solitude and silence are insightful. Solitude can bring peace but also loneliness if prolonged. Silence can be calming, yet it can also be heavy if too much. Finding peace amidst chaos is a personal journey, balancing noise and quiet. Peace varies with what, when, and where we seek it.

  14. Declan on November 6, 2024 at 7:44 PM

    I can understand this to a degree, being away from home has made it hard to meet people and while sometimes that can be nice, it can also be pretty depressing at times.

  15. Declan on November 6, 2024 at 7:50 PM

    This poem speaks to me. Being away from home it has been hard to meet people and while sometimes that quiet can be nice it can also feel isolating.

  16. Anna C on November 7, 2024 at 9:04 PM

    Your poem nicely shows the balance between being alone and feeling lonely, quiet and noise. The lines “Silently, I yearn for solitude amongst chaos” and “Loudly, I tell those that accompany me to leave me to be alone” stand out. It’s a clear reflection on finding peace in a noisy world.

  17. Choudhry Ahmed on November 17, 2024 at 3:44 PM

    This is beautifully introspective—it captures the delicate balance between solitude and connection, silence and noise. It really resonates, especially with how peace can feel elusive yet essential. Such a thoughtful reflection on the human need for both stillness and companionship.

  18. Quoc Nguyen on November 18, 2024 at 1:48 AM

    Your poem makes me think about the balance between solitude and silence. I liked the line, “Loneliness for even a short period can cause harm.” It shows how quickly isolation can become painful.
    The way you describe silence as both “a privilege and punishment” is powerful. It captures how silence can heal but also overwhelm.
    The last question, “What, when and where is peace?” stuck with me—it’s a great way to leave the reader reflecting on what peace means.

  19. eliana on November 20, 2024 at 7:50 PM

    Sending resonance and prayers for your search for inner peace and quiet, wherever you are. You have a deep gift.

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