Title 16

 By KC

 The title I was given does not make me a champion
 Nor would I brag or boast about it
 Under 18 down in the jail,
 And now all of a sudden DC does not give bail
 
 Never thought I’d be here
 Writing this poem
 Or seeing my mother through a TV screen
 Talking through a phone
 I’m considered a minor
 But in an adult environment
  
 My family can’t save me now
 The food is garbage and the jumpsuits are bright
 It’s been months since I’ve even been outside
 Commissary always needs money
 And instead of the days getting easier day by day
 It gets harder day by day
  
 The title I received
 Instead of a championship belt
 It’s replaced by shackles and handcuffs 
 

Title 16 allows juveniles in Washington, DC to be tried and sentenced as adults for certain offenses.

7 Comments

  1. Ed Jones on May 20, 2013 at 11:20 PM

    The confrontation of the reality of your situation, in all its bleakness, is moving. I found especially power the image of seeing your mother through a TV screen. I also like your ironic play on “Title 16.” Thanks for sharing this.

  2. lfbeekman on May 22, 2013 at 2:17 PM

    You made me feel your reality.

  3. WilderSoul on May 26, 2013 at 6:25 AM

    Dear KC,
    I like your poem. What stands out to me is the humility of the situation. I feel the desire through your poem to be a proud champion. And it makes it hard to get through the day, with bright reminders of the opposite. “My family cannot save me now.” This line really gets to me. Makes me want to say – God can save you. No matter where you are. No bars can keep him from you.
    Your poem brings tears to my eyes.
    Love,
    Anasera

  4. anthonycohnTony on June 1, 2013 at 12:54 AM

    This is really great work. Your words have intensity and power. Keep writing!

  5. Mbachur Mbenga on July 2, 2013 at 1:18 PM

    KC,
    I am totally feeling all of your emotion in this poem.
    I hope that you keep your head up through this all. I know these times get hard, but just know that you have a support system here and we aren’t going anywhere!

  6. Lila Weitzner on July 2, 2013 at 1:31 PM

    KC,
    The way that you made “title” mean so many different things made your poem complex and interesting. I appreciate that you are so open in your poem. Thank-you for sharing. The vulnerable, personal details are what made this poem so powerful. Keep writing! I can’t wait to read more.

  7. Andre Williams on July 2, 2013 at 4:07 PM

    KC, your poem is moving, keep your head up. Things will get better over time.

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