This Is Who You Are To Me
By CJ
In my ocean, you are a rainbow fish
Because you have beautiful colors
In my grassy field, you are a flower
Because you smell good
In my galaxy you are a planet with moons
Because you keep our family together
In my heart you are the blood
Because you keep me alive
You are my world
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This poem is so beautiful! It reminds me of my mom and all that she has done and sacrificed for myself and my family. I especially love the part, “In my galaxy you are a planet with moons/Because you keep our family together.” You really do an amazing job of capturing how beautiful this person is and how much they mean to you.
Thank you for sharing.
So incredibly vivid! My favorite line is, “In my galaxy you are a planet with moons
Because you keep our family together.” It’s amazing how someone can be held to such a high regard in our personal lives.
CJ,
Such an earnest poem. With every line, you can tell how much this person means to you and how high their place is in your life. I loved your imagery and how your evocative language proudly states how this person brightens up your days. Beautiful writing!
This poem is so beautiful! I can really feel how much this person means to you and how you really value them. I love the line about the blood and heart.
Hi Cj, my name is Emily and I attend university in Detroit. I came across this website from one of my classes where we are engaging in community and service. I thought your poem was beautiful. The love you have for your family and specifically this person truly shines through. I loved the wording you used to describe the beauty and greatness of your person. It seems as if they are the glue that holds everything together and I love the connection that you have. My favorite line would be “In the ocean you are a rainbow fish, because you are full of beautiful colors.” I have seen images of rainbow fish before and they are of true beauty. I can tell from this line how highly you think of your person and how wonderful they are. They keep you going and push you to be better. They are the one thing that is keeping you alive right now. For me, I have one of these myself and know how great it feels to have someone there for you. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
Hi Cj, my name is Emily and I attend college in Detroit. As part of one of my English classes, we are including service and community into it and that is how I came across this website. Right away, I could tell the love you have for the person in your poem. You have a way of words that expresses yourself, but also paints a beautiful picture of this person you love. I love how you compare them to a rainbow fish with all of their colors. I also like how you compare them to the galaxy. I can tell this person is someone that holds the glue together in your family. They are there with you through it all and that is fantastic to read about. I hope that I can share this love with someone in the future and that someone can share it with me. Thank you for sharing.
CJ,
I loved your expression of feelings of beauty and love in your poem! Its so great to see that you can write and express yourself and your feelings about someone who may light up your life for the better. I think everyone has one of those people in their lives and I think we can appreciate it and them so much for being that person or thing that can make our whole field or ocean of life beautiful. Those who improve your life and those who are improved by having you in their lives will love this piece. I encourage you to continue writing!
Hi CJ,
You did an awesome job with this poem. When I read this poem I thought about all the special people in my life that I love and adore. This person you are describing in this poem must be so special to you as well! I love how you say that this person has beautiful colors. When I think of that I think of someone who is not only beautiful on the outside, but someone is so beautiful on the inside. Someone who has a nice, pure heart that shows you all types of love and happiness. This person seems like they bring out the best in you which is the best kind of person. Those people can be very rare and hard to find. Thanks for sharing this with us!
Shawn
Dear CJ,
I loved your poem. I thought it was very sweet and such a great representation of how a close family unit impacts us. The reader can certainly see how much you care about and love the person you’re writing about. The third stanza “In my galaxy you are a planet with moons/Because you keep our family together” is my favorite stanza because you touch upon the importance of the moon in our world and how without the moon we would not be complete. I loved the many metaphors you used to explain your deep flow of love for your family and your admiration for that person. Keep up the great work!
CB
This poem is a beautiful expression of love and appreciation. Love is the best thing we can do as humans. It is so wonderful to read people’s thoughts on love through poetry. I have always found comfort in expressing my love for others through poetry because it feels like the safest way in which I am able to do so. I am so happy to see that you have found love and have simultaneously found an outlet to express it openly. Thank you so much for sharing. Never stop loving.
Hi CJ,
I love this poem! The imagery is so vivid, and the piece overall just radiates happiness and love. This poem describes exactly how I feel about my family, and it was quite heartwarming to read. My favorite line was the one about being a planet with moons in your galaxy. Thank you so much for sharing this sweet poem.
Ainsley
Hi CJ,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The imagery and word choice used really conveyed your emotions. I also liked how easy it was to connect to your poem. As I was reading, I was able to think of people in my life who connect, and who my “rainbow fish” would be. This poem definitely put a smile on my face, so thank you for writing.
Hi CJ,
I really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. The second I started reading, I connected your words to the people in my life that I love. You conveyed your powerful emotions through the poem and it’s clear how much you love the individual you are writing about. My favorite line is the blood line! Thank you for sharing.
I really like this poem. I like how creative this is and it has a lot of emotion in it. This is really good!! Great job!!!