Dogfriend
By MH
I never spoke two words to you
Yet you love me
I didn’t have to ask, however
You gave me my name
Even the place you live called home
I’m able to live just the same
I’m even cool that you always dominate our exchange
I have to feed off of you
When you’re happy, I’m ecstatic
When you’re angry, I’m mad
When you’re down, I can’t help but feel sad
I move off of you and obey your commands
One-way communication since I can’t speak
But all your words I understand
Could you ask for a better friend?
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“You gave me my name”- that line is so lovely! I really like how you played with perspective here. It’s clear that you care deeply about your dog. I like how you end on a question, leaving the reader wanting to hear more. You use parallel sentence structure in a way that illuminates your purpose. Can’t wait to read more from you!
This poem reminds me of my dog. So quiet and yet gives me everything I need. Powerful and thoughtfully written.
MH,
Adorable tribute to your furry friend! I’ve felt the same way about many of my pets, they’re always there when you need love or a comforting presence. You’re never judged or unappreciated with a pet. Amazing writing and I can’t wait to see what you come out with next!
When I read this poem I related it to an unborn baby and a mother. There relationship is communicated through pure nurturing. It started when we were babies and we couldn’t cant talk yet! Love is love. We are humans who naturally feed off emotion! The true power is controlling how we feel when we are angry.
Thank you
Dear MH,
Thank you for writing and sharing this poem. It reminded me of how easily our relationships with our dogs come– they’re just content to be with you all of the time, and it usually doesn’t take much to communicate with one another despite the obstacle of language. I really liked the line “I move off you and obey your commands,” because, while the relationship is one way and dominating in the poem, this also implies that the dog is making choices based on its owner’s energy, and that feels like a way of communicating even though they can’t speak with one another. Thank you for writing such a powerful poem that reminded me of my own dog and how pleasant his company is!
Best,
JM
This poem made me miss my dogs at home! Very well written and I felt like it really described the human and dog relationship. Great job!
Dear MH,
This poem is so sweet and full of heart! Your writing made me miss my dog, Taco, so much. I love that you told the poem through the eyes of your dog. It was an extremely interesting piece to read! The way you opened the poem “I never spoke two words to you/ yet you love me” is a great way to start it. Those lines emphasize how seamlessly our pets do care for us and show us love, without knowing much about us. I know my dog definitely matches my energy, as you mentioned in your piece. If I am excited, she is most certainly excited as well. Your poem brought a smile to my face and extra love for my dog today! Thank you for sharing.
Best,
CB
This poem is kind of emotional and nostalgic. The bond between a pet and their owners is strong. It’s a loving friendship where trust is key. I have a cat and I love her very much yet, she has never spoken. Love is not always about communication it’s about another language of understanding. Emotions play a large role in this relationship. You must understand some words like food or play but anything else is the tone of the voice. You got this and remember the best is yet to come!
This poem is very unique and personal. From reading this poem I can tell how close you are to your dog and how much they mean to you. It is very interesting to me how your mood depends on your dog’s mood during the day. If your dog is what keeps you going every day then always look to your dog when you need an outlet. This is a great poem, keep up the great work!
Hi MH,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It gave me nostalgia in the best way possible. My dog passed away a while ago, but I still think about her all the time. She never spoke to me, but I knew she loved having me as her friend. The bond between a pet and its owner is so strong, and I am so glad you conveyed this message so well in the poem. Thank you for sharing.
Hi MH!
I loved this! I don’t know if I have ever really read a poem from the perspective of the pet as opposed to being about the pet and I liked that a lot. You are so right, they come into our lives and immediately love us and want us to be happy. I am so grateful for my dog, he is the light in my life on the days it is hard to see through the dark. So to answer your question, no you could not ask for a better friend! Thanks for sharing.