The Computer
By DH
I was given this computer when I was born
And I think it’s crashed
This computer contained
Everything about my past
I turned it off then tuned it on
And still getting a blank screen
There’s no internet on this computer
Just the things I’ve seen
When I got it, I was told
I had a lifetime full of storage
They didn’t lie to me
I just used it poorly
I think my computer’s beat
Like Goldilocks full of porridge
The IT guy down on 35 K says I just need to reboot it
Let it rest for a couple days
He said it’s been through so much
Too much drink, so many jays
I said can I just erase its data
Or throw the thing away
He said no, you silly boy
A mind’s a terrible thing to waste
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excellent poem. Great metaphors, I loved the imagery. It feels dark, ironic, unsure of a way forward. Very very nice.
Hey! I really enjoyed your poem because the extended metaphor is really interesting. Comparing your mind and time to the computer is really clever. My favorite lines are “When I got it, I was told I had a lifetime full of storage.” That is when it really spoke to me. We do have lots of time, but how we spend it and the good or bad memories we make effect that. Thank you for sharing this vulnerable and real poem.
Hi DH,
I like your poem because it talks about how we remember the past and how powerful it can be. I like how you use metaphors and imagery, like comparing the computer to Goldilocks and the porridge. It makes the poem come to life and makes it easier to understand. Your poem also has a good sense of rhythm and rhyme, which gives it a sense of flow.