My Ultimate Sun
By RE
Your light shines to the ends of the universe
Far beyond what anyone can see
N.A.S.A. has classified you phenomenal
In all that you embrace with energy and love
To all existence, always persistent
Yet so far and distant
Light years away, but still able to display
Your power, strength and cordiality
You are amazing
What can one do without you?
I’d imagine become weak and bitter
Shiver and wither, from the lack of T.L.C.
Your tender love and care is what I mean
Plus everything in between happiness and elation
You inspire me, Beauty
Awesome Beauty
Inspired me to write this poem
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I love this poem, the visuals and the rhyme scheme are ver poignant, and resonate with that sense of loving or yearning for someone or something.
-CP
This is beautiful and vivid. You write with such power and depth. There is clear emotion and clarity in your words. I can’t wait to read more of your writing.
When reading your beautiful poem, it made me wonder who you were speaking to through the poem. Were you speaking to someone or was the poem speaking to someone? Who is the You? Who is ultimate Beauty for you? Thank you for igniting my imagination and warming my heart with your words.
This poem is so direct and yet so mysterious. It’s quite vivid in the sense that we can tell your subject has left a great mark on you, but at the same time we barely know a thing.
The imagery in this poem is wonderful! From beginning to end, this poem does such a great job of creating vivid and beautiful imagery for the reader. I wonder, who is this poem written for? It could be a love poem, written for someone who the author feels very strong love for. It also could be a poem written about a close friend of the author, perhaps a family member or a child. The way you describe this person in your poem makes me wish that I knew them! They seem absolutely radiant (no pun intended :)) Thank you for sharing!!