I’m Thinking About You

By: JP

All day I been thinking about you
Seeing stars in the sky hoping it was you
And seeing your smile, I know it was cute
And talking to you on the phone, you always kept it true
Thank God that I met you
The first time I saw you I wanted to say
I love you
Just you and only you
Slow songs make me sad and mad
Just what we used to do
Now we older, we never gonna leave or cheat
And you always in my heart
You’re just pretty like you was never on Earth
But you fall out the sky and said I Love You

2 Comments

  1. Kat Downward on March 21, 2014 at 12:15 PM

    This poem brought tears to my eyes. Love is so powerful!

    Reply
  2. Cassidy on October 19, 2022 at 8:57 AM

    Dear JP,

    This poem was very powerful and charming. Love truly is one of the greatest powers this world has to offer. Sometimes, it even helps your to conquer everything. As you stated in the first line, “All day I been thinking about you”, you think about your loved one in difficult times, as well as happy times. I can feel how grateful you are for this person in your life and how influential they have been over you. That gratitude is extremely special and is what makes your writing so strong. I also love how this special person is such a large source of inspiration for you and your writing. Great job and thank you for sharing!

    Best,

    CB

    Reply

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