I Couldn’t Win

Like a moth captured, I remain confined
While those looking in are unable to set me free
My freedom’s revoked, when I speak I choke
I try to talk, but my words simply flee
My once beautiful wings are becoming brittle
My fragile body’s becoming sore
The windows to my soul are clouded with despair
My gentle heart is now torn
I look for a helping hand in these times
No one to rescue me from my stress
Claustrophobic I am in this jar
Lack of ventilation’s causing me to lose my breath
Each day I fight to survive and conquer this tragedy
I’m slowly losing my strength
By tomorrow, I’ll be dead and gone
After years of fighting a battle I couldn’t win

3 Comments

  1. Monica on December 23, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    The images in this poem are very vivid. This is beautiful writing! I feel your distress in the situation you’re describing. I hope you continue to express yourself through poetry!

    • rd on January 18, 2012 at 2:59 PM

      i love your remarks. very constructive

  2. rd on January 18, 2012 at 3:00 PM

    this was a real deep poem. i use to have similar feelings once upon a time in your same shoes but writing the way u wrote this poem got me through my struggle. continue to let out your feelings and your make it.

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