Growing Up

By DG

 

Troubled thoughts, troubled actions

Back and forth, over and over

Makin’ decisions, changing decisions

One foot in, one foot out

Try’na change but hard to get out

Changing surroundings, changing peers

How easy it is when you’re lookin’ in

Inside the box, outside the box

Is this what I’m all about?

Searching and asking

Lookin’ and finding

Time to change

Time to grow

3 Comments

  1. Bri on September 25, 2012 at 9:56 PM

    I really like the hopeful and the melancholy vibe this has 🙂

  2. Meg on September 27, 2012 at 3:05 PM

    This is beautiful– it really feels like someone being pulled in two different directions. I also like the “look” of the poem, how the lines get shorter and shorter all the way to the end, as though the tugging and the pain is getting harder to deal with. Then a great, positive ending!

  3. Anna Carpentiere on November 9, 2022 at 1:48 PM

    This poem is emotional and persistent, which makes it nice to read. Growing up is something we dream about as kids, but once we are at the cusp of leaving the nest we take a step back. Reaching that chapter in life is something some people don’t get to experience; it can be emotional and challenging. Life wouldn’t be enjoyable if it was easy. Change is hard, you might lose the people around you because you’re moving on and growing up, but its important to cherish the memories you had and create many more. You got this and remember the best is yet to come!

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