To My Daughter
I walk through the day, hidden in my disguise.
With fear in my heart and pain in my eyes.
Fear of a man?
Hell no,
Fear of a woman.
Well I would say so,
Not fear of bodily harm.
Like broken legs or broken arms.
I fear the way she looks at me today.
What she thinks of me because I am away.
I am sorry I betrayed her trust
When I speak to myself, I scream and cuss.
I can only apologize for all my mistakes.
But I promise to make it up to her!
Whatever it takes.
I have lost so much in search of gain.
When this journey’s over I will never leave home again.
All my life I dedicate to you.
Always know, without a doubt,
That I Love You.
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left me speechless
Absolutely beautiful.
Very touching.
I´m actually very surprised of how well written most of the poetry here is.
Keep up the good job job Guys, literature redeems!
Really beautifully written.
The message here is wonderful. It’s so good to see that this man cares for his daughter and is sorry for what he’s done. As for the poem itself, it sounds like a lot of what Eminem writes about, but makes him look like Gary Busey.
Beautiful poem, I teared up a bit at the end.
man, that’s a tearjerker. i really liked the rhythm, and the rhymes felt very natural. i hope your daughter gets to read it. thanks for posting this! peace.
Really excellent work. I love the line “I have lost so much in search of gain.” You say so much with that one line and it is very powerful. I want to know more about what you mean when you say “Fear of a woman”. Does this mean you are afraid for your daughter the way any mother is afraid for her child? That is the first impression that I got, but the next few lines make it sound like what you are saying is that you are afraid of what a woman would be afraid of (emotional damage) more than what a man would be afraid of (physical damage). Maybe you mean both! Either way there are a lot of good ideas in this poem and I like how it ends on a positive note. Good job, keep writing!
This is beautiful. Fitting and powerful, I am inspired by your honesty. Your phrasing is great. My favorite line is, “I have lost so much in search of gain.” Wow. Outstanding.
This was beautiful. I hope he can get out and live the life he wants to live. Never lose hope, there’s always a silver lining.
There should be a book of these… they are incredibly inspirational, and seem to serve a good purpose.
This is beautiful!
This is a touching poem; you show concern and dedication to your daughter. Writing poems forces us to be expositional and honest, both with ourselves and the reader, and you have achieved that. Poetry brings out our rawest emotions that we sometimes don’t want to address, especially if they are painful. The fear you feel of disappointing your daughter shows that you want to change from when things went bad, and that you always will put her before yourself and be there for your little girl, no matter what. Keep writing!!
Very well written. Inspires empathy early on and keeps it throughout. You should definitely keep writing!
That is truly beautiful.
This is so amazing and honest. I’m touched by your bravery in writing this. True poety is something that speaks to the reader and touches their heart. You have definitely done this.