I Really Do This

By BG

I love to write my thoughts with paper and ink
If only to get a response of what it is you think
When I want to, I lay down and write rhymes
In the form of poetry line after line
Sometimes it takes a minute or two
Others five, though it’s all true
That’s what I like most about it
It don’t take long at all to write it
Plus it’s therapy
All positive energy

Comments

  1. BG,

    I love this poem! I reminds me of why I like to write and the power that poetry has. I agree- poetry really is like therapy and brings in so much positive energy. Also, I really like how you rhymed each line. The rhyming felt really natural and not at all forced. Really great job! I can’t wait to read more!

    -Cameron

  2. Sabryn Ferchichi says

    BG,

    I love how this was like an ode to poetry and your passion for it. It reminded me a lot of beat poetry or rap. Like “An Ode to Hip Hop” by Common and Erykah Badu. It’s short, but it also gets to the point and is like a slam resemblance of what’s to love about the art of poetry. “Plus it’s therapy,” is a line that really stuck out to me as I know me and many others feel this way when writing, like a form of therapy. Love to see more from you.

  3. This poem is different from all the other poems on here. I like how you explain why writing is so important to you. I also like the way you rhymed in the poem. All in all this was a good and unique poem! Keep up the good work!

  4. Dear BG,

    I love this positive message about the impact of poetry and writing! I also find that writing can be helpful for me to express my feelings, whether or not I’m writing for someone else to read. As you say, it’s like a form of therapy. Your poem is likely very relatable for many people. I love your rhymes and the meaning you convey in this short and sweet poem. It is also cool that you are writing directly to your audience. Keep writing! Sending lots of positive energy your way.

    Sincerely,
    Joyce

  5. BG,

    Poetry is such a powerful, therapeutic tool, and I love how you express and embody that in this poem. I also love how you are so honest about the process of writing poetry; sometimes as poets, we have a lot to say, and it just flows out of us, and other times, it takes more time to express what it is we are feeling deep down. I am so glad that you have found poetry as a means of therapy and a place to gather and compose your thoughts. It’s so important to have an outlet! Please keep writing and sharing your work!

    Best,

    Samantha

  6. BG,
    Writing is a great way to express what you are feeling! I am so glad that you have found something you like to do! Keep writing poetry!

  7. kassidilenae says

    BG,

    Thank you for sharing with us! Writing poetry can be so therapeutic. It helps us focus our thoughts and describe our feelings. Keep using your words for good!

    KC

  8. Jescie Roberts says

    Hey BG! I love the use of rhyme scheme in this poem, it allows me to interact with what you are writing and almost flow through it easier. It gives a sing-song pattern to your work. Also, I love how the poem shows your thoughts on writing poems to begin with. It is cool because you are writing a poem about writing poetry and it is cool to see your point of view as well as what writing poetry is all about! Keep on writing!

  9. Hi BG,
    I really like the way you write about writing. Your poem is short and simple, but it says all it needs to say and it comes across in such an honest and genuine way. I think it’s really cool that you use your writing as a way to express your thoughts and to channel some positive energy in your life. I feel the same way about writing— no matter what’s going on in my life, I always feel a little bit better after I’ve spent a few minutes with a paper and some ink. I also like how you wrote your poem with rhymes. It has a nice flow to it! Keep up the good work; this poem has inspired me to do some more writing myself, thanks to you!

  10. Megan Gaines says

    Hi BG,

    Thank you for sharing your poem! I really loved reading it and thinking about the process of writing. Reading about the process of writing a poem was really thought provoking and made me smile, especially with the rhyming. I completely agree that writing can be therapy and really help you figure out what you feel. I also think it can bring a lot of positivity to those writing it or reading it, and this poem definitely brought some positivity to me. I hope to read more of your poems!

    Sincerely,
    Megan

  11. Ziniya Shah says

    Hi BG,

    Thank you for sharing your poem, it was really good! I love how you simply outline the way to write a poem but still do it in a way that provokes one to think about the use of poem. Its wonderful that you use poetry for positive energy in your life and have an effective method to express yourself. Good job!

    -Ziniya

  12. Hi BG,

    Thank you for sharing this poem! I really liked the title you chose– it sums up the feelings you express in the poem so well and also shows a sense of excitement and awe in the act of writing. I think the process of writing is the most fun and important part, and so writing a poem about the process of writing a poem helped me reflect on the fun that comes with creating things. I got a real sense of the joy it brought you to write it. This poem struck me as a tribute to the best things about writing– including the connections made between author and readers– and I hope you keep writing more of them.

    Best,
    Joseph

  13. Hi BG,

    I really enjoyed the poem you wrote and how simple it was, but at the same time it helped provoke some deep thoughts. It was cool how you mentioned writing poetry is therapy to you because you can put feelings somewhere even if you don’t want to talk to someone about them. I also enjoyed how you talked about the process of writing and it could be really short, but it could also take a little bit more thought and time. I think your title pulled the entire poem together and it was the cherry on top.

    -Maria

  14. Hi BG,
    Your poem is truly inspiring. I love how you use poetry as your way of expressing yourself. Poetry is not easy for many but it seems that it comes naturally to you. Your title is great and it definitely wraps up the whole poem.
    -Allison

  15. Hi BG,
    I really like you poem, and your description of what writing does for you. Although you said the process and time you dedicate to writing something may vary, the fact that writing is like therapy remains true throughout your poem. I also like the positive energy that’s released through writing poetry. It is a great way to clear one’s mind and it’s good to write everyday! I hope you continue writing and sharing your wonderful work with others!

    Best wishes,
    Jordan

  16. BG –
    Congratulations on writing a fantastic poem! I really enjoyed reading it. I think many people can resonate with this poem, because many people also use writing as a form of therapy. Another piece that really stuck out to me is that you mentioned all your poetry is true. Writing from your life experiences will make your work so much more personal and a more emotional experience for a reader. Keep up the great work!

  17. Riti Kalra says

    This poem is really wonderful. You express the power of writing and how it has transformed you as a person from the time that it takes (recognizing the intricacies of this process and why that’s important), to how it brings about positive energy, and acts as a form of therapy. I hope you continue to use writing and poetry as an outlet to express how you’re feeling.

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