Cambio es Posible
I always used to say I walked alone
while I was above the influence
I always used to say “No me vale nada”
when I used to do anything
Now I always say I’m walking with a guardian angel
In the presence of god
Now I say I’m sorry for the dumb mistakes
I did while I was out there
And now once I touch down
I can accomplish my lifelong goal
And become a businessman
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Dear Poet,
One of the things I loved about this poem was the way you mix Spanish and English. It gives the poem a distinct sound and a unique voice. It helps me get a sense of who the speaker is and where they’re coming from. The title is really great. I also really like the contrast between how the speaker used to be (“I always used to…”) and how they are now (“Now I…”) I especially love the image “Once I touch down.” It makes a connection between the guardian angel and the speaker, who also wants to fly.
I think you could expand on the last line. Instead of just saying, “be a businessman,” you could tell us what that looks like. What will the speaker see/feel/hear in that future life? Will the guardian angel still be there? Maybe you could add a few lines with “Then I will…” to mirror “I used to..” and “Now I…”
Wonderful work. This poem made me think about my own past and the feelings I have–some regretful, some happy, and excited, hopeful and dreaming for the future. Thank you for sharing this hopeful and courageous poem.
S.S. in NY
Cambio es posible, change is possible. Great title for a great poem. I’m sure you’ll make a great businessman. Keep writing please!