Too Much

By TO

I’m young and I done too much

I’m like ridin’ a dirt bike with a clutch

I’m stressin’ a little too much

I wanna touch down soon

And just sit on my front steps

And look at the moon

I’m too much to handle

I might as well sit down

And light a candle

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2 Comments

  1. Sarah Hochberg on September 25, 2012 at 9:38 PM

    I love your poem. It was simple and very meaningful. I’m new to reading the work posted here, this will be my first comment, and your poem made me want to reach out to you. Keep writing!

  2. Meg on September 27, 2012 at 3:07 PM

    The image at the end is really beautiful; after stressing out and being jostled all around, I love the picture of a man just sitting in peace in the dark with only a candle and the moon for light.

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